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'Nobody'

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Nobody trusts / Trust in me
Nobody cares / Care for me
Nobody listens / Listen to me
Nobody shares / Share with me
Nobody wants / Want me
Nobody sees / See me
Nobody hears / Hear me
Nobody needs / Need me
Nobody looks / Look into me
Nobody feels / Feel for me
Nobody answers / Answer me
Nobody real / Are you real?
Otherwise entitled 'A Stronger Concept Of Disillusionment' I wrote this poem while I was over in Victoria with some mates a few weeks ago. I was starting to feel pretty down because one of my closest friends who was with me at the time was being very secretive and deliberately avoiding me and then to make matters worse, a guy(nothing against him, he's a great person) that came along went and talked to her and she told him everything that was going on in her life that she refused to tell me, for reasons I don't really understand. Anyway, I was starting to feel a little neglected and wrote the left side of this poem first, then after I had time to reflect on whether I should be upset or simply expressing to my friend that I wished she were more open with me, I wrote the right side. Anyone who reads it please read the left side first(left side of the forward slash) and then the right side to understand my changing frame of mind in this piece of poetry.....
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CharlesMonster's avatar
It's very prettyfull! ^^